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My Favorite Detective Bio
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Sleuth Admin
Sleuth Admin
Tale Spinner

Nov-19-2004 16:44

I think palmer has my favorite bio. Not sure why, and pretty sure I don't understand it, but there you go.

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Dark Raven
Dark Raven
Trusted Informer

Mar-27-2006 22:48

I had a nice bio for a while but decided to chance it to real life issues. I got good feedback in chat about it...

Lady Emerald Devon
Lady Emerald Devon
Nomad

Mar-28-2006 15:18

*loves Raven's stories*

LilRach
LilRach
Well-Connected

Mar-28-2006 15:32

This may sound conceited, but I love my bio.

I am considering changing it soon to reflect now being in Delhi, rather than New York. Please let me know what you think of it, if you have time.

Lil

Sherlock Holms CPA
Sherlock Holms CPA

Mar-28-2006 17:13

All I know is that I spent an hour and a half on my first bio, went to post it, and then found out I had timed out and lost all of my work... I can't say I'm a great writer but I was upset that I lost an hour and a half out of my life. But being the stubborn person I am, I did the same thing the next day, except this time I copied and pasted into Word, so that when it said I had timed out, I just went back in and copied and pasted. It's like George Bush says... "Fool me once, shame on... me... no... Fool me twice... Fool me you can't get fooled again, ok?!"

Charlie Cain
Charlie Cain
Thespian

Mar-29-2006 09:27

I just updated mine. So check it out okay.

Isabel S. Abbott
Isabel S. Abbott

Mar-31-2006 17:20

My boi is very minimalist (:)

Isabel S. Abbott
Isabel S. Abbott

Apr-1-2006 18:04

*typo
boi=bio

Isabel S. Abbott
Isabel S. Abbott

Apr-4-2006 18:03

Check out my new bio please, and give me some feedback.

crunchpatty
crunchpatty
Old Shoe

Apr-8-2006 02:11

Okay here comes feedback.

Isabel, it's really really good. With very few words, you managed to establish enough tone to make whoever reads it curious enough to come back and see if there is another chapter. Plus...hey...free of grammatical errors, lol. I wish my own students did half as well.

You've also done a really good job of writing it with your audience in mind by incorporating several of the familiar parts of the both the game and things people have dropped on other threads (the skirt bit). This is really important . Writing for other people is quite different from just dumping a bazillion words on your diary. You're good at it...I hope you keep writing.



Madame Giry
Madame Giry

Apr-8-2006 16:06

Thank you for the feedback. Isabel's my other detective. Your feedback means so much to me.

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