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Haiku Can You?
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Maddie Hayes
Well-Connected
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Feb-18-2006 02:41
Can you Haiku?
Etymology: Japanese
: an unrhymed verse form of Japanese origin having three lines containing usually 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively
Maddie got a gun
"bang bang" shot him in the head
woke up, just a dream
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ichiban
Well-Connected
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Feb-25-2006 07:06
Not to be nitpicking but following 5,7,5 is a must when writing HAIKU, which BTW is actually 3syllables. An often overlooked aspect of Haiku is that it usually involves some aspect of nature or the seasons.
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Maddie Hayes
Well-Connected
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Mar-1-2006 19:53
Yes I know its about nature or seasons, but we can do this for fun anyway!!
By the way mister,
detective sleuthing is fun
but so is haiku.
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JoanofArc124
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Apr-11-2006 14:20
Heres a game, help me come up with a middle line.
When thou speaks aloud,
___________________ ,
But why do they yell?
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JoanofArc124
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Apr-13-2006 15:23
Come on, I'm sure one
Of you haiku masters can
Solve this problem.....right?
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Serges
Vigilante
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Apr-13-2006 16:05
Been online since noon
Solved my tenth case at midnight
Hours wasted? NO!
Client locked his doors
Broke in and found diary
Waste of several clicks.
Need a Sleuthville home?
Call The Hitchhikers today...
We provide the towel. :)
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Serges
Vigilante
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Apr-13-2006 16:07
I can count to five
Then I can count to seven
Where did I lose six?
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Secret_Squirrel
Safety Officer
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Apr-13-2006 20:36
They are very random lines to join?
;) in dedication to Ben and the reaction he gets to [some] changes to the game...
"All good Sleuthers turn and smile,"
[yeah yeah no seasonal ref. ichiban but what're you gonna do...]
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JoanofArc124
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Apr-18-2006 15:12
: )
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crunchpatty
Old Shoe
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Apr-19-2006 01:54
Ichiban means best
Serges, six is lost to ether
Secret squirrels know best
(woot I rhymed *snorts an etherized squirrel*)
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biggie528
Lucky Stiff
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Sep-11-2006 22:32
Buttercup is dead
SS is sad, Al is the king
Skullface Killa rules
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