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Elsey
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Aug-25-2004 12:46
Elsey walks into the local bar, The Tricky Mister, and asks her old buddy Cyrus to pour her a drink.
"Something girly," she asks him. "Something the boys will laugh at."
She smiles and looks around the room. She thinks about who else might walk into the room tonight. She turns back to her girly drink and waits for Sir James to arrive, as he undoubtedly will at some point.
Just then, the front door opens and in walks....
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Makensie Brewer
Super Steeper
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Jun-7-2005 12:41
Makensie is still sitting on the bar stool, watching what is going on. Makensie then says "Time" Daru and Makensie ,say at the same time..."Time for what?"
The man steps closer, he some how looks familiar but noone can yet place him....Daru takes a closer look and....
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Angel_waiting_for_wings
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Jun-7-2005 13:00
it is her father whom died when she was 13 years old.
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Makensie Brewer
Super Steeper
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Jun-7-2005 13:14
Daru takes a closer look and finds that this man has very kind eyes, and in a gentlemanly way says...."Ma'm I was watching from a distance , and I am a friend of your husbands" Daru smiles and says "Oh, I thought you looked familiar but couldn;t place who u were" he smiles and says "He thought youmight need a ride home, so he sent me. Would you please accept so he doesn't strangle me for not taking care of his beautiful wife?" Daru says, "Most certainly....." and looks ather friends and says "Goodnight ladies and Cyrus, I will see you all soon!"
The man and Daru walk out the door....and Jstkdn says, with a smile,....
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Makensie Brewer
Super Steeper
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Jun-7-2005 13:34
"Hmmmm, that was nice of him" Makensie says, "I could be wrong and maybe it is just the detective in me but, it looked as if that will be the last time we Daru in this bar" Everyone got silent, and....
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Makensie Brewer
Super Steeper
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Jun-7-2005 13:35
we SEE Daru in this bar, I meant. need tolearn to proofread :)
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Angel_waiting_for_wings
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Jun-7-2005 13:40
a tear fell from an unknown place, but one person in particualr knows where it came from and they say...
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Makensie Brewer
Super Steeper
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Jun-7-2005 13:47
"Did you hear that sniffing sound" Makensie turns and looks toward the doorway, and there is Angel, with tear running down her face. She says "I just saw Daru leave...she isn't coming back is she?"
Makensie gently says , "We don't know Angel, come on in and sit down,I'll buy you a drink"
Angel walks in...
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Angel_waiting_for_wings
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Jun-7-2005 13:51
and sits down. She says, "Daru, We were best friends until highschool. I don't think I could make it if i never got the chance to say i was sorry. I was not the best friend our freshman year. I can't remember much of what the rumors were but i remember the last words spoken were 'I hate you." Makensie is speechless. Then suddenly the door swings open. it is...
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cfm
Nomad
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Jun-7-2005 13:52
Cfm enters the bar, intending to ask Cyrus a few questions. She's heard the rucous around here for the past few days and has been trying to avoid it, but her clients lies have forced her arrival at last. As she walks across the room, she feels a small wet drop grace her cheek. Thinking she is imagining it at first, she wipes the drop from her face and glances around and whispers, "Angel."
She sets her briefcase and cane on the nearest table and, walks to the stairs along the wall.
She climbs the stairs and makes her way across the catwalk above the stage where she finds Angel staring down at the others, looking as though she wanted to run, scream, and cry all at the same time.
Cfm curls Angel in her arms guides her down the steps, collecting her belongings before they head out the door together.
Cfm glances behind her and calls out to the other girls in the bar, "You guys find any triffids around here that has any goods on Milton, let me know. That man is driving me mad!"
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Angel_waiting_for_wings
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Jun-7-2005 13:59
once more the door swings open and it is angel. sh seems to have left her glove. She lets one last tear fall. She turns to leave...
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