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waiting for new day.
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Vin Riddick
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Jul-18-2004 23:33
I am trying to start a little experiment. While waiting for the new cases start up for the new day. Lets start a Big story line. If you don't want to that's fine. The best is Diane. She can do great story lines. Anyone want to start. (Obviously I am really bored)
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Vin Riddick
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Aug-3-2004 20:49
Bella Luna stood up and said to Vin.
" VIN Are youok. Are you feeling better?"
" Yes" Said VIn in a weak Voice. " Oh Bella I am so sorry. Please forgive me. I didn't know You had a Twin and I had no Idea she died. I would have NEver iNvented this robot. Please Forgive me."
Elsey Looked at VIn.
" Vin It was Dr. Swartz not you. You can't control Your personalities."
" I know but I the real me can always watch deep down inside while one of my other Personalities take over. I can always see what they are doing. One day hopefully they will make medication for my Problem."
Everyone Gave Vin a Group Hug.
" Lets Take this out to the trash." Bella Said.
They Heaved up the Robot and threw her out.
THE END
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Vin Riddick
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Aug-3-2004 20:52
THANX FOR PARTICIPATING everyone. IF someone wants to start a new story line BE MY GUESS.
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Elsey
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Aug-3-2004 21:38
:D
i'm sad to see it go!
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Elsey
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Aug-3-2004 23:18
Ok, I'm too into this story. I have just copied and pasted it into Microsoft Word, and it takes up 25 pages currently! I plan to play around with it, do a little editing, and see how it looks. If anyone wants to see the finished copy, let me know and I will email it to you when I finish!
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