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Jul-18-2004 23:33

I am trying to start a little experiment. While waiting for the new cases start up for the new day. Lets start a Big story line. If you don't want to that's fine. The best is Diane. She can do great story lines. Anyone want to start. (Obviously I am really bored)

Aug-2-2004 16:48

Then DaRu Points to Stella what's that large wire sticking out of Stella's ear. Sure enough a large wire is now protruding from the eyeless Stella.

Aug-3-2004 00:08

Elsey's eyes grow wide as she stares at 'Stella'.

"It's a robot!" Elsey yells, pointing at the eyeless woman. "Was there EVER a real Stella?"

Aug-3-2004 00:33

Vins Eyes Glaze.

" I can answer that. My name is Dr. Swartz. Dr. Kay was right in warning you about Dear Vin but it wasn't Vin she was actually warning you about it was me. Not only am I a Doctor But also a Toy Maker and I wanted to see what would happen if I put my new invention into the world, For one day A store will me named after me as FAO SWARTZ TOY EMPORIUM."

Everyone was stareing at Vin.

" She's Crazy says Gunn. A store Emporium indeed. Your a Nut."

Vin Snapped and Grabbed Gun by the Shirt.
" WHo you callin a NUT Shrimp."

Elsey ran over and Calmed Vin Down.

Vin Slumped and Sat Heavily in a chair.

" Well," Said Elsey. I guess we know the Secret now. What do we do?"

Everyone stared not knowing what to do next.

Aug-3-2004 12:53

....Meanwhile on at "Just Around the Corner" Kay is throwing her daughter a birthday part. she is 2 today...

sir edward helps kay put the decorations up he is a retired detective (retired very early on).

Gosh i need to get the cake form the bakery before it closes ill be back.

kay leaves to go get the cake for the party.

Aug-3-2004 14:06

HAPPY BIRTHDAY to your BABY

Aug-3-2004 20:49

Bella Luna stood up and said to Vin.

" VIN Are youok. Are you feeling better?"
" Yes" Said VIn in a weak Voice. " Oh Bella I am so sorry. Please forgive me. I didn't know You had a Twin and I had no Idea she died. I would have NEver iNvented this robot. Please Forgive me."

Elsey Looked at VIn.

" Vin It was Dr. Swartz not you. You can't control Your personalities."
" I know but I the real me can always watch deep down inside while one of my other Personalities take over. I can always see what they are doing. One day hopefully they will make medication for my Problem."

Everyone Gave Vin a Group Hug.

" Lets Take this out to the trash." Bella Said.

They Heaved up the Robot and threw her out.

THE END

Aug-3-2004 20:52

THANX FOR PARTICIPATING everyone. IF someone wants to start a new story line BE MY GUESS.

Aug-3-2004 21:38

:D
i'm sad to see it go!

Aug-3-2004 23:18

Ok, I'm too into this story. I have just copied and pasted it into Microsoft Word, and it takes up 25 pages currently! I plan to play around with it, do a little editing, and see how it looks. If anyone wants to see the finished copy, let me know and I will email it to you when I finish!