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Dec-21-2004 19:58

I write poems as a hobbie. I wondered if anybody else here did. If any1 wants to hear any of my poems just ask.

Dec-21-2004 21:09

ok. this ones called backstaber. i thought it kind of goes with the whole murder thing.

Knife is sharp
back is bleeding
in my heart
hate is seeding

Blood drips down
lies and hate
live inside
it's too late

Act al nice
I know the lies
I can see them
deep in your eyes

So watch your back
you never know
when I'll be coming
to let blood flow

Dec-21-2004 21:12

Kind of creepy....

But well written!

Dec-21-2004 21:15

Thanks. My friend, Heather,lied to me about something really important so i got upset. at least i took my anger out on paper instead of on her.

Dec-21-2004 21:16

Yes, it is much better to just write about it. Even though neither is a good idea! ;)

Hope the police don't find that poem! ;)

Dec-21-2004 21:20

Ha ha. Im over it now and we're still freinds. Plus, i'd never hirt her.

Dec-21-2004 21:22

Writing can be a great outlet for emotions of all kind. I don't think I would have survived highschool if I hadn't written a lot down on paper to let it all out. :)

Dec-21-2004 21:32

Yeah i know what you mean completly! I write about running away just so i'll never do it. Im weird like that. i write about death alot too. like this poem i wrote. its like the first poem i ever wrote. its called Life in the Past

How do we know when future is here and past is gone away
For future changes fast into past thats what I say
Every second of the day past is growing stronger
And someday the future will be gone
And we will be here no longer
Becase there will be here nothing left to live consitering
That future will be over when the bell of death rings
But past will always live long and strond
Even when we are gone


This poem can mean whatever you take from it.

Dec-21-2004 21:33

strong*

Dec-21-2004 21:46

Im bored. I finished all my cases for the day but i don't want to leave. If i get off, then i'll have nothing to do. *sigh*

Dec-21-2004 21:48

lol! There are a lot of us that get that way! :) Jojo has been asking for a support group, vaccine, anything that would help! :)