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Dec-21-2004 19:58

I write poems as a hobbie. I wondered if anybody else here did. If any1 wants to hear any of my poems just ask.

Dec-21-2004 20:37

Now, there is no need to over react. No body hates you. Sometimes the board is just not so busy. Sometimes we are busy with cases. Sometimes, we just aren't in the mood for poetry, but nobody hates you.

Dec-21-2004 20:39

I'll take some poetry!

Dec-21-2004 20:45

I didn't just get upset because no one typed anything. its also because my dads going nuts. Sorry i over reacted.

Dec-21-2004 20:54

Do you really want some poetry? ok. This one has no name.

The sky is black
the moon is full
and your not there.

The sun is up
the sky is bright
and your not there.

The day is young
you've missed the fun
cause you weren't there.

School was bad
it made me mad
and your not there.

Got up late
look at my face
and your not there.

It's good to know
that wasing your face
can really kill a pimple.

Dec-21-2004 20:56

HAHA! I like it!

How about "My Friend, The Pimple"? ;)

But really, that's good!

Dec-21-2004 20:58

Thank you! my best friend, brooke, said i should send my poems it to get published. How bout another?

Dec-21-2004 21:04

Sure! I could use another!

Dec-21-2004 21:09

ok. this ones called backstaber. i thought it kind of goes with the whole murder thing.

Knife is sharp
back is bleeding
in my heart
hate is seeding

Blood drips down
lies and hate
live inside
it's too late

Act al nice
I know the lies
I can see them
deep in your eyes

So watch your back
you never know
when I'll be coming
to let blood flow

Dec-21-2004 21:12

Kind of creepy....

But well written!

Dec-21-2004 21:15

Thanks. My friend, Heather,lied to me about something really important so i got upset. at least i took my anger out on paper instead of on her.