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racedogg2
racedogg2

Dec-18-2004 18:38

The worst day of my life. The day my parents and my older brother were killed in a gruesome murder.
I was just a 10 year old boy when it happened. My parents and my older brother had left me with a babysitter beacuse they had "business" to take care of. I had never really known much about my parents. They told me that it would be better off if I didn't ask questions. Of course, I was a child so I never suspected anything and I did as I was told. Telling this story makes me wish now that I had. Maybe it never would have happened...
Anyway, I was watching T.V. peacefully as if nothing were going 2 happen that same day (boy, was I wrong.) My babysitter and I heard the doorbell ring and she went to get it. I heard anenormous scream over the voices on the television. What happened next I will never forget.
I went to the door to see what the ruckus was about. My babysitter was lying on the floor, dead with a bullet lodged in her chest. I know I'll never the blood seeping out and surrounding my little shoes. But the worst was yet to come. I looked up to see two tall men in black uniforms, one of them holding a pistol. I was too shocked to do anything, even scream. One of them picked me up and managed to get his hand over my mouth. Luckily, I managed to bite into his hand until he had to let go and hid behind the couch before he could shoot me. I knew the danger of my present situation and all I could think was "Why me?" as a tear rolled down my cheek. I suddenly heard my parents cars pulling into the driveway. They stepped out of the car holding guns and aimed them at my captors. I was only a child and had no idea what to do until the second man pulled his shirt open. There was a bomb strapped to his chest and all I could was run. I ran as fast as I could to the safety of the basement where I heard the explosion. It was the worst sound I had every heard. A loud, sonic boom that brought my family to death's knees.


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jstkdn
jstkdn
Well-Connected

Dec-19-2004 09:06

Just a little friendly advise here. I know you love this game, you love this community etc. However, I feel if no one is straight with you, you are going to ruin your reputation. As you may have noticed people either don't reply to your threads, or do so negatively. People saying subtle things out loud, or not responding to you, apparently is not enough for you to realize....that you are on your way to make yourself very impopular in here. As I know you don't want that, I wanted to give you a little advise.

Please stick this stuff in your bio. And stop creating new threads that:
1. Can be found in other threads
2. Are already answered in other threads
3. Are really for private messages.
4. Have no purpose.
5. Definitely stop posting to your own threads, when you notice that people don't like it.

I sit here baffled as to why you are posted this?

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