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Of Phoenix & Concubines: A Jospeh Zeo SM
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Paranoid_Android
Story Teller
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Dec-6-2009 15:03
"During the premiére performance of a Chinese opera at the Grand Theatre, the prima donna is killed in a tragic stage accident… or was it a 'staged' accident!"
*drumroll* If you venture over to Shanghai you will find a new SM by Joseph Zeo.
I recommend this to you all as worth a play.
[Ben'll shift this post to Game Announcements later]
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Vulkie3
Haynes
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Dec-6-2009 15:13
Thnx for the headsup Paranoid!. Unfortunately,out of cases,so I'll do it tomorrow!
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Irene
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Dec-6-2009 15:59
Congratulations Zeo with a great mystery ;-)
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Irene
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Dec-6-2009 16:00
I noticed it was "Featured" right away. Well deserved! :-)
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Anais Nin
Thespian
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Dec-6-2009 16:24
Congrats, JZ!!! :)
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Elizabeth Christie
Tireless Tiger
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Dec-6-2009 16:27
Congrats JZ! Can't wait to play it! I really enjoyed your first one. :)
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Heimlich VonVictor
Vigilante
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Dec-6-2009 17:13
Congrats JZ! I love it! It's a great mystery that will keep you guessing until the very end. I highly recommend everyone to give this one a play.
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Joseph Zeo
Tale Spinner
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Dec-6-2009 19:12
Thank you everyone! You have all been wonderful support. For those who had helped me test it in the past, I'd like to extend my gratitude once again. My special thanks to SS, for being a more than excellent editor. Honestly, the FM would only be 1/3 as good without his magic touch :) I love the result, for it is a synthesis of group effort.
In terms of the story line I like this one way above my first FM (the first being my test subject). Hope you all enjoy the melodramatic story :P Feel free to post or PM me any comment, I'd love to hear from you about what you think, because it will help me improve on my 3rd one. :)
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Secret_Squirrel
Safety Officer
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Dec-6-2009 19:26
:D the beauty of being involved with Noir for so long is that I've lived through so many melodramas I have a wealth of experience to tizzy up peoples SM's with ;D
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Joseph Zeo
Tale Spinner
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Dec-6-2009 19:50
Oh and Elizabeth, thank you for your encouragement. I'm glad you like the first one (^^).
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Vulkie3
Haynes
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Dec-7-2009 03:33
Great story JZ,I've sent you the little "mistakes" that I've seen in your story (SQUIRREL!). xD. Anyhow,great plot,great confusion making and a great writer. JZ,you are truly an SM/FM writer and you're already remembered as one,but now one of the best! Together with Heimlich,you'll rule the SM/FM's xD. (just kidding people xD.)
Anyhow,can't wait for the third one... ^-^
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