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Oct-6-2009 15:36

Things don't always go as you would want them to go. I looked at the dead body of 26 year old Carol Fisher. She had been mutilated by someone. Stabbed a total of seven times and then shot once in the head. The local police knew who the killer was. The problem was finding him. They had a name. They had proof. They had physical evidence that linked him to the crime and witness evidence. It was enough evidence to put him a way for life.

I was worned that he is a master of disguises. He can disapper with the blink-of-an-eye.

Detective Thomas McDonald looked at me when I was finished examining the body. "I heard about your reputation around here."

"What about it?" I asked

"If you can catch our killer, Charles Craig, I can promise a handsome reward." he replied.

I thought about it. Money. I needed money real bad. I was behind on rent for both my apartment and my office. Money is good.

"Fine. I'll take it," I said and I left back for my office. I reviewed the background and case file of Mr. Craig. This wasn't going to be easy, that was for sure. I decided to make a phone call to a few friends of mine to see if they would be interested in making some decent money in helping to find a killer who could blend in to even the smaller crowds.

It was dark and there was nothing I could do for the night. I'd have to start in the morning. So I went home for the night to get some sleep. The next morning, went to my office to make a call to a few friends to see if they'd be interested in making a few dollars in helping to find this killer.

Nov-7-2009 06:55

I had deposited my $7000 into my bank account carrying only so much cash every now and then. I still stayed in touch with eveyone except Vulkie. I had not talked to her since the day she came back and saved us. That much I was thank ful for and over time, I had come to forgive her for her betrayal that one day.

I looked down at the envelope. It was blank. I wrote down Vulkie's address on the envelope full of her reward for aiding in the capture of Craig. I put on my fedora trench coat and made my way out into the city. It was winter and cold out side. I made my way to Vulkie's place and put the envelope in her mail box.

In a few days time, she would come out to find it in her mail box. She would wonder to herself, what it was and who sent it. Inside it would be seven thousand dollars and a personal note apologizing for the way I had treated her. Left and made my way back into the city.

As I walked through the crowded streets, I passed by someone who looked familiar and I stopped. I slowly turned my head and the person looked like Vulkie. As I turned back around, I could feel her doing the same thing.

But in the end, I pulled out a cigarette and lit it inhaling deeply. In time, Vulkie and I would beceome friends again. I walked through the city disappearing into a crowd of people.

One day, all of us would meet again to solve another case. Until then I made my way back to my appartment to get some much needed sleep.

--END--

(A special thanks to Molly Maltese, Heimlich VonVictor, Charlie Cain, Nellie McKinzey, Vulkie, and Brian Flannigan. Thank you for making this RP possible.)

Nov-7-2009 14:12

Molly's Short Epilogue:


One of Billing's men suddenly appears on the scene! He manages to untie Billings and abscondwith him to a place where he can rest and recuperate fully from his wounds!


(Since we, of course, know that Billings is one of the main characters in Molly's ongoing story so it would be bad form to completely incapacitate him and leave him for capture...right?)

:) Right.

Nov-7-2009 14:13

Awesome RP Marc. Too bad it had to end so abruptly. I was enjoying myself.


Thanks guys!

Nov-7-2009 15:57

Marc, Molly, Nellie, Vulkie, Brian, Heim, and Riza. I had a fun time everyone thanks Marc for allowing me a part in your saga... I hope we can write another story sometime.

Well everyone this was the case of the Disillusioned Detectives. Now as for me well thats a whole nother story. Stay tuned.


This is Charlie Cain: Happy Hunting.

Nov-7-2009 17:12

I had a blast, Charlie! You're great fun to work with!