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A heist of a million pounds
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Vulkie3
Vulkie3
Haynes

Sep-12-2009 17:22

(small note. This story is written by me and no one has to participate in it. Only I will feature in it. Just because I'm a bit bored,I'm starting to write this story!)

Gah,money. People always need money. We can't live without it. It's being used to purchase stuff like groceries,seats,telephones and more. Money makes happy,you say? I disagree. The more money you have,the more unhappier you'll be. You can spend it like a mad man,but what if the money is up? You'll be broke and in trouble. If you try to save your money,live from the interest,you'll also be in for a surprise. The taxes on money are not so swell....

Anyhow,you want to know the story,what happened on the 29st of December? You really want to know? Sigh... Well,it's a terrible story to tell. But if you really want to know.... Here we go....

It was on the 29th of December,16.30 p.m. The great detective Vulkie,well known for saving President Roosevelt,capturing arch villians within a few days and making money like a revolutionair person,was in need of money.

"Great. Broke again. Well,I'll have to go to the bank" Vulkie mumbled and she walked towards the bank,not knowing what would happen on that same day,at 17.10 p.m.

As she entered the bank,the "Circle of Light" employee greeted the well known detective and asked how business was. "It's been terrible,because it's awfully quiet these days. Well,I'm here to get some money. Could you fetch some of my "box"?" Vulkie asked.

"Why,sure Miss Vulkie. Fill in this form and I'll get it immediately." the assistant said.

As Vulkie filled in the form and signed the form with her signature,the assistant left and came back with a small pack of bills.

"And that makes 1000 pounds" the assistant said,while counting the bills and handing them over towards Vulkie.

"Thank you. Goodbye" Vulkie said and just as she was about to leave,the first person came in and shot the guard down.


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Vulkie3
Vulkie3
Haynes

Sep-13-2009 01:55

(what did I say. No need to "join" it -.-. Sigh....)

Vulkie3
Vulkie3
Haynes

Sep-13-2009 05:56

As the five of them walked out of the bank,the whole street was " lighted" with cop car and sirenes.

" This is the London Metropolitan Police. Put your hands up in the air and throw your guns away!" the police chief said.

"No way copper. This is a hostage" the no mask man said,as he pointed towards Vulkie. "Try anything funny and she dies".

"You let us go and there will be no trouble!" the small man replied and so,the five of them got into their "escape van",with the back doors open to hold coppers off.

"We're rich!" the boss said. "Yeah. One million pounds. Good work boss!" the big guy said,driving the car.

"Let's go to the hideout" the no mask man said and so,the van was "driven" towards the hideout. It was an old barn,30 miles out of London.

The small man took Vulkie out of the van and guided her to the barn.

"You' ll be released as soon as possible,we just need to lay down for a while. So don't try anything funny. I'll stand watch on you" the small man replied,leading Vulkie to a room and he locked the room.

Vulkie looked around. The detective saw no window or any possible escape point. She was locked there. But for eternity? "No",Vulkie thought,"I will be released. They promised it. But will those crooks keep their word?"

****The next day****

The boss came in,with some breakfast. "Here,eat it!" the boss yelled and he placed a small bowl with some cereals and milk in it.

"Thanks" Vulkie murmered and the boss went away.

The big guy locked the door behind him and there sat Vulkie,with a bowl of cereals,in a barn,30 miles from humanity....

Sean Dart
Sean Dart

Sep-18-2009 22:37

"Where the hell did they go?" Dart screamed at the old woman.

The woman shook her head. "I don't know! I'm just the landlady who rented a room to them!" Dart didn't believe her so he jerked her arm upward snapping the bone.

"Now tell me what you know!" he yelled

"I don't know anything!" she yelled "Please just leave!"

Dart reached over and picked up the pot of boiling hot oil off the stove and threw it in her face, "Are you going to talk now grandma? Huh? What now? Huh?"

The landlandy howled in pain as her flesh sizzled and she hit the ground. "Stop!" she yelled "I know nothing."

Dart shook his head and picked up the gigantic pot of spaghetti sauce on her stove. He walked over and dumped it on top of her as she screamed in pain. "Where are the men who took Vulkie?"

Unable to move she croaked out "I don't know! They were a group of men who sometimes spoke Korean!"

Dart kicked her in the stomach "You knew this the whole time and kept it from me?" he pulled out his gun and blew her brains all over the wall. "I hate liars..."

Vulkie3
Vulkie3
Haynes

Sep-19-2009 14:12

(going to stop with this story. It was just to try to make an interesting one,but I don't know anything creative anymore... From now on,cleused)

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