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DaRu
DaRu
Well-Connected

Nov-15-2007 19:26

Well, I finally got up the nerve to write a bio....lol. Actually, when I first joined Sleuth in 2004, I wrote one, but didn't like it, so I attempted a rewrite. Now, my good sleuth friends, I would like some feedback, no matter what your comments may be....ha! Well, alright......try not to be too hard on me, OK?



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DaRu
DaRu
Well-Connected

Nov-16-2007 11:53

Ctown, all Texan cares about is being fed and watered. Oh, yes, just in case, be sure to throw him a blanket, cause he’s extremely cold natured. Since he’s use to sleeping with our furry boys, he won’t mind the blood hounds, or the fleas…ha!

DaRu
DaRu
Well-Connected

Nov-16-2007 11:57

PS: Just to let you all know who the furry boys are I'm referring to, they are our two Yorkshire Terriers, Woodrow, and Zachariah...lol.

Kevin Greene
Kevin Greene
Old Shoe

Nov-17-2007 01:44

I sure hope that isn't a true story.

If it is, I will never sleep again! :-)

Spaces cost 1 character in most scripts, but not in all. And I don't think it counts in Sleuth. However, every paragraph spacing costs 2 characters, regardless of the site. But still, paragraphs are worth it! ;-)

Breitkat
Breitkat
Pinball Amateur

Nov-17-2007 15:10

Your bio looks wonderful, Daru! Great job!! ;-D

DaRu
DaRu
Well-Connected

Nov-17-2007 19:53

Hi Kevin, I promise you don’t have anything to worry about….he-he. I do think it is fun seeing my face pop up as a suspect and seeing if I’m guilty. I like it when I get to investigate my spouse….ha! I read your Bio, and it’s very creative and I enjoyed it, as did Texan. I took your advice and restructured mine, and now it’s easier to read, so thanks. I feel proud to hear your positive input, since you’re such a great writer.

Breitkat, I appreciate the compliment. Texan and I appreciate all you have done for our agency, since we returned. I feel we’ve developed a close relationship in a short period of time, and we value it. There are a lot of great changes since I played two years ago and I look forward to exploring them all.

I would love to hear from the rest of you, on what inspired you to write your “Bio’s.” Perhaps, how many times you’ve changed it or done rewrites. I know my first one was about my being Nancy Drew, but it was silly, so I deleted it. I waited over two years to take a different approach…LOL!

Oh, and Yofoshow, your comments made me so proud. Glad you thought it was different and original. Guess I’m like that in real life. As a professional singer/songwriter, I think it helped. Thanks again.


DaRu
DaRu
Well-Connected

Nov-17-2007 20:20

PS: Wow, I didn't catch it until after I posted it, the part: "I feel proud to hear your positive input," which I meant, "I felt proud to read your positive input." Hey, I don't have supernatural powers....LOL!

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