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DaRu
DaRu
Well-Connected

Nov-15-2007 19:26

Well, I finally got up the nerve to write a bio....lol. Actually, when I first joined Sleuth in 2004, I wrote one, but didn't like it, so I attempted a rewrite. Now, my good sleuth friends, I would like some feedback, no matter what your comments may be....ha! Well, alright......try not to be too hard on me, OK?



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DaRu
DaRu
Well-Connected

Nov-16-2007 11:31

Oh, by the way Kevin, just to let you know, the woman you thought was me, wasn’t. I promise, with my fingers crossed, ha! Here’s the truth. Three years ago I was involved in the arrest and incarceration of a woman who murdered someone. But, soon after she was put in prison, she disappeared like “Houdini.” Over and over she’s been captured for murdering people, and as soon as she’s incarcerated she escapes. Then I learned she had plastic surgery to look just like me, and that terrifies me. Wow, when you mentioned this last night, I had trouble going to sleep. Then when I finally drifted off to sleep, I had a horrible nightmare where the NYPD, breaks down my door, storms into our bedroom, yanks me out of bed, slaps on handcuffs, then drags me out of the house, kicking and screaming, while Texan follows behind in his underwear...lol! Then, just as they were driving away with me in the back of the "Paddy Wagon," I woke-up all clammy sweaty. Can you believe that? OK, OK, I confess, it was and is me Kevin…....lol!  Whew, I’m glad this isn’t for real…lol!

DaRu
DaRu
Well-Connected

Nov-16-2007 11:53

Ctown, all Texan cares about is being fed and watered. Oh, yes, just in case, be sure to throw him a blanket, cause he’s extremely cold natured. Since he’s use to sleeping with our furry boys, he won’t mind the blood hounds, or the fleas…ha!

DaRu
DaRu
Well-Connected

Nov-16-2007 11:57

PS: Just to let you all know who the furry boys are I'm referring to, they are our two Yorkshire Terriers, Woodrow, and Zachariah...lol.

Kevin Greene
Kevin Greene
Old Shoe

Nov-17-2007 01:44

I sure hope that isn't a true story.

If it is, I will never sleep again! :-)

Spaces cost 1 character in most scripts, but not in all. And I don't think it counts in Sleuth. However, every paragraph spacing costs 2 characters, regardless of the site. But still, paragraphs are worth it! ;-)

Breitkat
Breitkat
Pinball Amateur

Nov-17-2007 15:10

Your bio looks wonderful, Daru! Great job!! ;-D

DaRu
DaRu
Well-Connected

Nov-17-2007 19:53

Hi Kevin, I promise you don’t have anything to worry about….he-he. I do think it is fun seeing my face pop up as a suspect and seeing if I’m guilty. I like it when I get to investigate my spouse….ha! I read your Bio, and it’s very creative and I enjoyed it, as did Texan. I took your advice and restructured mine, and now it’s easier to read, so thanks. I feel proud to hear your positive input, since you’re such a great writer.

Breitkat, I appreciate the compliment. Texan and I appreciate all you have done for our agency, since we returned. I feel we’ve developed a close relationship in a short period of time, and we value it. There are a lot of great changes since I played two years ago and I look forward to exploring them all.

I would love to hear from the rest of you, on what inspired you to write your “Bio’s.” Perhaps, how many times you’ve changed it or done rewrites. I know my first one was about my being Nancy Drew, but it was silly, so I deleted it. I waited over two years to take a different approach…LOL!

Oh, and Yofoshow, your comments made me so proud. Glad you thought it was different and original. Guess I’m like that in real life. As a professional singer/songwriter, I think it helped. Thanks again.


DaRu
DaRu
Well-Connected

Nov-17-2007 20:20

PS: Wow, I didn't catch it until after I posted it, the part: "I feel proud to hear your positive input," which I meant, "I felt proud to read your positive input." Hey, I don't have supernatural powers....LOL!

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