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DaRu
DaRu
Well-Connected

Nov-15-2007 19:26

Well, I finally got up the nerve to write a bio....lol. Actually, when I first joined Sleuth in 2004, I wrote one, but didn't like it, so I attempted a rewrite. Now, my good sleuth friends, I would like some feedback, no matter what your comments may be....ha! Well, alright......try not to be too hard on me, OK?



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Kevin Greene
Kevin Greene
Old Shoe

Nov-15-2007 20:14

Hey! I just accused someone who looked just like you!

You aren't wanted, right? :-)

Anyway, the bio was good. Long, but good. I would suggest splitting it up into paragraphs to make it easier to read, but otherwise, itwas good!

Read my bio? I spent a lot of time on it, then my computer deleted it, then I spent a long time on it again. :-)

And, really. It was my computer that deleted it! :-)

DaRu
DaRu
Well-Connected

Nov-15-2007 20:29

Thank you Kevin for your input. I realize it was lengthy, but I didn't think I had enough room to split it up into paragraphs, however, I probably need to shorten it, and do just that. I will read yours tomorrow and let you know. Right now, my spouse (Texan) is begging me to quit and to please come to bed. Guess I should be a good little wife, and obey him...lol. Happy hunting.

yoyofoshow
yoyofoshow
Old Shoe

Nov-16-2007 02:28

I agree with Kevin apart from making it into paragraphs it was very good. It was more original than a lot of bios I have read and it was more personal which I liked a lot.

And don't worry, the maximum length of a BIO is are determined by the amount of characters there are in it, so adding spaces to create paragraphs shouldn't do anything..I think.

Texan
Texan

Nov-16-2007 10:02

Good bio DaRu, of course I have to, since you cook my dinner and I don't want to sleep on the couch, ha.

DaRu
DaRu
Well-Connected

Nov-16-2007 10:24

Ah, my dear hubby, have I ever refused you anything? Don't be afraid to speak your mind. I mean, I wouldn't dream of making you sleep on the couch....lol. After all, it's way too comfy, I think? I believe the dog-house would be more suitable. *wink.....wink* Don't worry babe, I love you!



ctown28
ctown28
Huntsman

Nov-16-2007 11:22

lol, well we have a very nice dawg house over at our HQ!

DaRu
DaRu
Well-Connected

Nov-16-2007 11:31

Oh, by the way Kevin, just to let you know, the woman you thought was me, wasn’t. I promise, with my fingers crossed, ha! Here’s the truth. Three years ago I was involved in the arrest and incarceration of a woman who murdered someone. But, soon after she was put in prison, she disappeared like “Houdini.” Over and over she’s been captured for murdering people, and as soon as she’s incarcerated she escapes. Then I learned she had plastic surgery to look just like me, and that terrifies me. Wow, when you mentioned this last night, I had trouble going to sleep. Then when I finally drifted off to sleep, I had a horrible nightmare where the NYPD, breaks down my door, storms into our bedroom, yanks me out of bed, slaps on handcuffs, then drags me out of the house, kicking and screaming, while Texan follows behind in his underwear...lol! Then, just as they were driving away with me in the back of the "Paddy Wagon," I woke-up all clammy sweaty. Can you believe that? OK, OK, I confess, it was and is me Kevin…....lol!  Whew, I’m glad this isn’t for real…lol!

DaRu
DaRu
Well-Connected

Nov-16-2007 11:53

Ctown, all Texan cares about is being fed and watered. Oh, yes, just in case, be sure to throw him a blanket, cause he’s extremely cold natured. Since he’s use to sleeping with our furry boys, he won’t mind the blood hounds, or the fleas…ha!

DaRu
DaRu
Well-Connected

Nov-16-2007 11:57

PS: Just to let you all know who the furry boys are I'm referring to, they are our two Yorkshire Terriers, Woodrow, and Zachariah...lol.

Kevin Greene
Kevin Greene
Old Shoe

Nov-17-2007 01:44

I sure hope that isn't a true story.

If it is, I will never sleep again! :-)

Spaces cost 1 character in most scripts, but not in all. And I don't think it counts in Sleuth. However, every paragraph spacing costs 2 characters, regardless of the site. But still, paragraphs are worth it! ;-)

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