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48484848
48484848

Jul-18-2007 17:35

Now, i love to type stories, and when I read something I decieded to write a story based on sleuth, I copy and paste the story on this post each time I have alot done on it;

Sleuth

You might know me from some other cases I’ve done, The Great Hopkins Murder or The Case of the Scrambled Message, 2 of my most my famous cases. Anyway, my name is 48484848, or 48 for short. And this is my story of my friends and me in the most difficult case ever. I still haven’t worked on a name.

“Oh, darn!” I said backing out of my desk, I had bumped my knee when getting to my papers on a drawer, it’s not that I’m always mad when I get hurt, it’s just that I was cranky, I went to sleep to late and woke up to early. “Ok, ok, clam down now I need to look at these papers.” I told myself breathing in and out. “Hu, that’s weird, Amelia said that the suspect had an air tight alibi.” Amelia was my boss, here. I worked in 2 different places, here at the district offices, and in an agency called JTO. “Better go talk to her.” And I left my office. “Hi, 48 how’s progress?” said Amelia has I walked into her office. “Jack Herman as a fake alibi, not an air tight one!” I said trying to keep my cool. “No, he has an air tight alibi like I had said.” “What are you doing to me?! Trying to steer me in the wrong direction again!” I blew it. “Look, if you’re referring to that case, put it behind you ok?” “That’s not your job, to put me in a different direction so that you can solve the case yourself.” I left Amelia in her office before she could answer. I just knew I blew it, but she didn’t take to hard like usual, was she hiding something?



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nicnic
nicnic
Battered Shoe

Jul-20-2007 23:59

I think this should maybe be on the Role Playing Stage boards?

48484848
48484848

Jul-23-2007 16:29

“Oh, gosh!” said Billy looking at Kaite open the bank door. “She really doesn’t want to be noticed does she?” “I don’t know, anyway lets go do our part of the deal.” I answered. “Fine.” grumbled Billy turning the car on. “We’ve gotta make it to the mayor’s office right?” “Yup, just a couple blocks away.” I answered. “Oh ok. What do we need there? It’s not like the mayor will want to talk to us even if he has time. I mean he is busy.” “Oh, Billy stop doing that. He’ll want to talk to us because it evolves his wife’s life.” “Uh?” asked Billy getting out of the car. “You’ll find out.” I answered.


“So, you important information for me?” asked the mayor. “Yes we do. You see the case we’ve been working on evolves a certain killer that, according to our calculations, might target your wife next.” “Oh, really.” said the mayor looking at me with consideration. The mayor’s phone rang. “Yes?” he asked. Billy and me snuck out through the door. “Sir your needed down here.” “Ok, I’ll be there right away. Girls I’ve… where did they go?” Despite they’re disappearance he ran down to the staff lounge.

A few hours later we met up with Kaite at my apartment. “What’d you learn?” I asked. “They confessed that there was something that they were involved with him, yet not the murder. He was kind of like a secret agent for them. So that means a lot of other people could be involved with it. Like people from Easter Trades or Order of Socrates.” Answered Kaite. She stopped for a second then looked at Billy. “The mayor’s wife is in real danger.” “What, no. That was just a theory.” Said Billy doubtful. “I just remember asking them about how we our theory about the mayor’s wife, they agreed because she had the same job as Lucas did! Until she got married that is, but the gold is that her last “mission” for them involved getting information about a rival faction. We just have to figure out which one. Then talk to the leader, not revealing our reason for being th

48484848
48484848

Jul-23-2007 16:30

there.” “You’re on fire Kaite!” Billy and I exclaimed. I accidentally stepped on the remote for the TV in all the excitement. “Today’s late night news comes a breaking announcement, word just broke out that the mayor’s beloved wife Mary. Was murdered this very night.” Billy, Kaite, and I dropped to the sound of that. Then the door opened. “I see you saw the news about my wife.” Said the voice. “Mayor!” exclaimed Kaite. “I need you to find this killer, I should have listened to you when you were warning me, but now look.” “We’ll take the case. We’ve already got a couple suspects right now. You know anyone of interest?” I asked. “Yes, I do, George Mackfollen. He hated my wife. Frances Felon, she wanted to steal her inheritance.” “Were any of them in a high standing with a faction?” “Oh, yes. George was very good with the Dies Arcanum Brotherhood and Frances was good with The Green Hand.” “Thanks Mayor.” Billy said. “Well I’ve got to go bye.” And the Mayor left. “There are two parts to this case. Kaite and me will take the first part. You will take the new part.” Directed Billy. “Ok, I guess I’d better get going. Oh and tell as soon as possible when you find something good.” It was late, but since I was going to be solving this part of the case alone it couldn’t hurt to start early. Besides it would be dawn soon. I went down to the subway so I could go to the crime scene.

48484848
48484848

Jul-23-2007 17:45

How hurt I felt seeing that room totally destroyed. Devastated I tell you. This wasn’t going to be easy. I wondered how my friends were doing, I didn’t know if they started as early as I did. The Mayor came into the room with a metal detector. “Why’d you bring that?” “You’ll need it.” That answer made me suspicious did he know more than he was letting on? “Well, start looking.” He said. Some how I didn’t feel like I could trust him. Despite my thoughts I looked anyway. Was he expecting me to find something or not find anything? I got on my hands and knees and started to crawl, the mayor examined my every move. I didn’t want him to see me find something important. I don’t know why, I just didn’t. I noticed that the longer I toke the more restless he got. He started to look at the walls and the ceiling and the bed. I realized that he did want me to find something so I went to the bed, his eyes lit up. Bingo! I was right and there on the top I saw the body and a hair, I got out a bag and put it in. Now I checked in the drawers, this made the Mayor tense as if he didn’t want me to. I shut all the drawers to relax him, not reveling the second clue I found, mail from the Order of Socrates, and The Eastern Trades. I quickly put them in my large pocket and got up. “I didn’t find anything but the hair.” I said looking disappointed. “Oh, at least you can still find the culprit right?” he asked. “Yes of course.” I assured him. “We’ll I’ve got to go and start working.” I said walking out of the room. “On the railing I saw a hair matching the other hair I found. Something told me that the Mayor was trying to through me off the track, but I couldn’t jump to conclusions or I could be saying hello to Shady and bye-bye 10,000 bucks. I left the house to get started on my work.



biggie528
biggie528
Lucky Stiff

Jul-24-2007 15:53

*agrees with nicnic*

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