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48484848

Jul-18-2007 17:35

Now, i love to type stories, and when I read something I decieded to write a story based on sleuth, I copy and paste the story on this post each time I have alot done on it;

Sleuth

You might know me from some other cases I’ve done, The Great Hopkins Murder or The Case of the Scrambled Message, 2 of my most my famous cases. Anyway, my name is 48484848, or 48 for short. And this is my story of my friends and me in the most difficult case ever. I still haven’t worked on a name.

“Oh, darn!” I said backing out of my desk, I had bumped my knee when getting to my papers on a drawer, it’s not that I’m always mad when I get hurt, it’s just that I was cranky, I went to sleep to late and woke up to early. “Ok, ok, clam down now I need to look at these papers.” I told myself breathing in and out. “Hu, that’s weird, Amelia said that the suspect had an air tight alibi.” Amelia was my boss, here. I worked in 2 different places, here at the district offices, and in an agency called JTO. “Better go talk to her.” And I left my office. “Hi, 48 how’s progress?” said Amelia has I walked into her office. “Jack Herman as a fake alibi, not an air tight one!” I said trying to keep my cool. “No, he has an air tight alibi like I had said.” “What are you doing to me?! Trying to steer me in the wrong direction again!” I blew it. “Look, if you’re referring to that case, put it behind you ok?” “That’s not your job, to put me in a different direction so that you can solve the case yourself.” I left Amelia in her office before she could answer. I just knew I blew it, but she didn’t take to hard like usual, was she hiding something?



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48484848

Jul-18-2007 17:35

I was about to leave my office when I got a phone call, “ Hello,” I answered. “Hi, it’s me.” “Oh, it’s you Maddie.” “So, what’s up, what are you doing?” “I’m going with Katie and Billy to a restraunt to talk about a case we’ve all been working on.” “Oh, I’m not doing anything really.” said Maddie. “Well, I’ve got to go. Bye.” I hung up. As I walked out the building door I saw Kaite with Billy in the Black Mustang. Black was Katie’s favorite color, and Billy, well she likes pink, and me I like blue. “Hi girls!” I greeted as I got into the back seat. “Yo, girl how you been?” asked Kaite. “Great, except for the fight with my boss.”

48484848
48484848

Jul-19-2007 11:30

“Oh, ouch!” said Billy. “It, doesn’t matter though, she acted kind of weird when I blew up like that.” I said. ‘Well, 48, shall we go to Willie’s Great, or to Hopkins Meal. “Willie’s.” I said. Billy got out her case file, and toke out a map, “You know being from America and living in Shanghai is odd. We’d know how to speak the language if people didn’t already know how to speak it.”

Willie’s Great is a quaint restraunt with everything to eat except fish. It was a Buffet, but when the new owner came in recently he turned it into a regular restraunt you’d see in America, which brought in customers. Tahkia, our well-known friend sat us in our usual spot, gave us our menus and asked if we wanted our regulars, Kaite said that they’d all have to regulars, so Tahkia toke our menus and left. “Ok, now the case files.” I said grabbing a file from my jacket. My Burnet hair swung into my face as I got it out. Billy, had her burnet hair up in a pony tail, and Kaite’s dirty blonde hair was usually down like mine.

You know what, people all around town call me 48, yet my real name, only known to my best friends, Kaite, Billy, and Maddie, is Kathren. Yet I never really liked it, so I made a code name instead of a real one. It helps a lot in cases. Now back to the story.

“Well, let’s see, it says here that Mariah has an air tight alibi, but there’s still something suspicious about her. What do you think?” I asked looking at Billy. “She might be working with someone, since she has a real alibi, the police can’t arrest her.” answered Billy.


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48484848

Jul-19-2007 11:34

[My real name is Kathren, I never] srry no edit button.

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48484848

Jul-19-2007 11:34

[My real name is Kathren, I never] srry no edit button.

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48484848

Jul-19-2007 11:34

[My real name is Kathren, I never] srry no edit button.

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48484848

Jul-19-2007 11:34

[My real name is Kathren, I never] srry no edit button.

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48484848

Jul-20-2007 10:13

But she might have nothing to do with it.” reminded Kaite who was focused on a certain page in the file. “What you looking at?” I asked. “Look, The Circle of Light said they had nothing to do with the case, apparently the victim, Lucas Mordant had a high standing with them.” said Katie. “You’ve got to ask them about that Kaite, me and 48 here need to keep them as our friends.” said Billy. “She’s right, they’re hard to live with when they’re not on your side.” I said.

Kaite looked at the bank and then back at the Black car where Billy and I were sitting in. Kaite was going to go talk to The Circle of Light people, she had a high enough standing with to go in and talk, but could care less about it so she was perfect to use. “Bye!” I said waving to her. “Bye.” said Kaite, throwing her jacket over her arms, it was cold that season.


nicnic
nicnic
Battered Shoe

Jul-20-2007 23:59

I think this should maybe be on the Role Playing Stage boards?

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48484848

Jul-23-2007 16:29

“Oh, gosh!” said Billy looking at Kaite open the bank door. “She really doesn’t want to be noticed does she?” “I don’t know, anyway lets go do our part of the deal.” I answered. “Fine.” grumbled Billy turning the car on. “We’ve gotta make it to the mayor’s office right?” “Yup, just a couple blocks away.” I answered. “Oh ok. What do we need there? It’s not like the mayor will want to talk to us even if he has time. I mean he is busy.” “Oh, Billy stop doing that. He’ll want to talk to us because it evolves his wife’s life.” “Uh?” asked Billy getting out of the car. “You’ll find out.” I answered.


“So, you important information for me?” asked the mayor. “Yes we do. You see the case we’ve been working on evolves a certain killer that, according to our calculations, might target your wife next.” “Oh, really.” said the mayor looking at me with consideration. The mayor’s phone rang. “Yes?” he asked. Billy and me snuck out through the door. “Sir your needed down here.” “Ok, I’ll be there right away. Girls I’ve… where did they go?” Despite they’re disappearance he ran down to the staff lounge.

A few hours later we met up with Kaite at my apartment. “What’d you learn?” I asked. “They confessed that there was something that they were involved with him, yet not the murder. He was kind of like a secret agent for them. So that means a lot of other people could be involved with it. Like people from Easter Trades or Order of Socrates.” Answered Kaite. She stopped for a second then looked at Billy. “The mayor’s wife is in real danger.” “What, no. That was just a theory.” Said Billy doubtful. “I just remember asking them about how we our theory about the mayor’s wife, they agreed because she had the same job as Lucas did! Until she got married that is, but the gold is that her last “mission” for them involved getting information about a rival faction. We just have to figure out which one. Then talk to the leader, not revealing our reason for being th

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48484848

Jul-23-2007 16:30

there.” “You’re on fire Kaite!” Billy and I exclaimed. I accidentally stepped on the remote for the TV in all the excitement. “Today’s late night news comes a breaking announcement, word just broke out that the mayor’s beloved wife Mary. Was murdered this very night.” Billy, Kaite, and I dropped to the sound of that. Then the door opened. “I see you saw the news about my wife.” Said the voice. “Mayor!” exclaimed Kaite. “I need you to find this killer, I should have listened to you when you were warning me, but now look.” “We’ll take the case. We’ve already got a couple suspects right now. You know anyone of interest?” I asked. “Yes, I do, George Mackfollen. He hated my wife. Frances Felon, she wanted to steal her inheritance.” “Were any of them in a high standing with a faction?” “Oh, yes. George was very good with the Dies Arcanum Brotherhood and Frances was good with The Green Hand.” “Thanks Mayor.” Billy said. “Well I’ve got to go bye.” And the Mayor left. “There are two parts to this case. Kaite and me will take the first part. You will take the new part.” Directed Billy. “Ok, I guess I’d better get going. Oh and tell as soon as possible when you find something good.” It was late, but since I was going to be solving this part of the case alone it couldn’t hurt to start early. Besides it would be dawn soon. I went down to the subway so I could go to the crime scene.

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