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Jul-17-2007 12:08

Jojo's new featured mystery "An Unconscious Murder" is up in New York. It is a light hearted romp through the world of teen angst in traveling carnivals set to music.

Just kidding.

This one is a very dark psycho thriller, and definitely worth the read. For a fun comparison, compare this one to "Staged Murder" in London. Jojo wrote that one two years ago and its great to see how much he's matured as an author.

Thanks to Jojo for writing, and PA/Secret_Squirrel for editing.

By the way, this mystery is rated Ridiculously Hard.

Jul-18-2007 01:36

Cool! Good job Jojo! I know from personal experience how hard it is to finish writing an SM. :)

Jul-18-2007 03:42

You'll definitely get a different experience playing Jojo's SM. Things could get a little 'clammy' all round really. I think it's unique in style, different from all the other FM's you've played, and at the very least, fail or succeed, you'll get a good read out of it.

Jul-18-2007 05:26

Wooo hooo!

*goes to NY to play*

Jul-18-2007 20:46

No music, but dang, that was a good FM :)

Not one for the kiddies :D

Jul-19-2007 06:31

Fantastic writting in this one Jojo, great SM, a real change from the day to day cases. I recomend this to all! Well worth the travel money.

Jul-22-2007 12:05

Couldn't wait for my hunt to be over so I could do this new FM. It was lots of fun! Thanks for putting the time into it, Jojo. It was really good! :)

Jul-23-2007 21:48

Thanks everyone!

I'm so glad to hear positive remarks after all the work that went into this one.

Jul-25-2007 00:47

Was really good Jo! Nice Job!

Aug-26-2007 12:45

I really liked this one too, definitely top3 on my list.
It was a bit of a handful with all the reading but very much worth it. My poor dictionary needed a good rest after that ;)
Thanks for the entertainment, Jojo!!