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Haiku Can You?
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Maddie Hayes
Well-Connected
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Feb-18-2006 02:41
Can you Haiku?
Etymology: Japanese
: an unrhymed verse form of Japanese origin having three lines containing usually 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively
Maddie got a gun
"bang bang" shot him in the head
woke up, just a dream
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Maddie Hayes
Well-Connected
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Feb-18-2006 05:56
David is funny
Maddie is too, but Coco
is clever. And you?
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Maddie Hayes
Well-Connected
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Feb-18-2006 06:07
Hmm That poem sucked.
A hunting I go
when miss coco tells me so
tis for fame I know.
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Agatha Misty
Old Shoe
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Feb-18-2006 06:18
I'm not sure if I'm drunk or if you are Miss Maddie but I'm seeing every thing in rhyme or is that rhythm or is that rhyme or is that...I give up.
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Sam Average
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Feb-18-2006 07:39
Not sure if she's drunk
They call her Agatha Misty
But who's she really?
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Sam Average
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Feb-18-2006 07:40
crud, Agatha has 3 syallables. >.<
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Sam Average
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Feb-18-2006 07:42
Not sure if she's drunk
She is known as Agatha
But who's she really?
There we go.
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Marmalade3
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Feb-20-2006 11:37
I think I'm going mad
Detectives shouldn't do haiku
They should solve crimes
But when we are bored
And there are no cases left
It's something to do
I used to do this at school! bit rusty though and I probably pronounce things differently syllable-wise!
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Sam Average
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Feb-20-2006 11:44
I think perhaps you do... at first I thought you were being ironic with your first Haiku as I read it as having 6-8-4 syllables. But if you pronounce the words differently to me... meh...
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Marmalade3
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Feb-21-2006 13:42
OK i just reread it and the first ones 5-7-4! oops!
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Sam Average
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Feb-21-2006 16:16
I read it as
I think I'm go-ing mad
De-tec-tives shoul-dn't do hai-ku
They should solve crimes
But hey, I only just scraped through my GCSE English. I even I don't trust my own opinion.
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