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Maddie Hayes
Maddie Hayes
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Feb-18-2006 02:41

Can you Haiku?
Etymology: Japanese
: an unrhymed verse form of Japanese origin having three lines containing usually 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively

Maddie got a gun
"bang bang" shot him in the head
woke up, just a dream


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Maddie Hayes
Maddie Hayes
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Feb-18-2006 05:53

No I don't think there is rhythm to Haiku. Its just 5 7 5 syllables.

Maddie Hayes
Maddie Hayes
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Feb-18-2006 05:56

David is funny
Maddie is too, but Coco
is clever. And you?

Maddie Hayes
Maddie Hayes
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Feb-18-2006 06:07

Hmm That poem sucked.

A hunting I go
when miss coco tells me so
tis for fame I know.

Agatha Misty
Agatha Misty
Old Shoe

Feb-18-2006 06:18

I'm not sure if I'm drunk or if you are Miss Maddie but I'm seeing every thing in rhyme or is that rhythm or is that rhyme or is that...I give up.

Sam Average
Sam Average

Feb-18-2006 07:39

Not sure if she's drunk
They call her Agatha Misty
But who's she really?


Sam Average
Sam Average

Feb-18-2006 07:40

crud, Agatha has 3 syallables. >.<

Sam Average
Sam Average

Feb-18-2006 07:42

Not sure if she's drunk
She is known as Agatha
But who's she really?

There we go.

Marmalade3
Marmalade3

Feb-20-2006 11:37

I think I'm going mad
Detectives shouldn't do haiku
They should solve crimes

But when we are bored
And there are no cases left
It's something to do

I used to do this at school! bit rusty though and I probably pronounce things differently syllable-wise!

Sam Average
Sam Average

Feb-20-2006 11:44

I think perhaps you do... at first I thought you were being ironic with your first Haiku as I read it as having 6-8-4 syllables. But if you pronounce the words differently to me... meh...

Marmalade3
Marmalade3

Feb-21-2006 13:42

OK i just reread it and the first ones 5-7-4! oops!

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