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bitter_suite24
bitter_suite24
Well-Connected

Oct-30-2005 19:25

Her internet died and won't be back for a month; she misses sleuth. So we're going to do a story for her set in Memphis, TN. I'll start and then someone else can pick up the thread.

Here's the beginning:
I walked down the dark street, angrily. The police had taken my case from me. This was the type of thing they wouldn't normally touch with a ten foot pole. But this time was different. The police cheif had looked at my notes, and said, "Good work; we'll take it from here." I had been shown the door. Now as I walked I wondered what to do with the rest of my evening; I had been planning on doing some further investigating. Suddenly a scream filled the air. Without a moment's hesitation I ran towards the sound. Maybe I would get some investigating done after all.

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jstkdn
jstkdn
Well-Connected

Oct-31-2005 16:46

Big evil LED stole the little girls chocolate. Now who will come to her rescue?

Makensie Brewer
Makensie Brewer
Super Steeper

Oct-31-2005 17:24

I will!! Just so I can have the chocolate *licks chops*

Lady Emerald Devon
Lady Emerald Devon
Nomad

Oct-31-2005 18:28

I don't even like chocolate that much, so that was really evil!

biomajorbeth
biomajorbeth

Oct-31-2005 19:26

So Leddy stole the Girls chocolate and she went running to Ran, in the darkness Det. Ran thought she was a boy and gave her tweny smackers to scream. The girl went to the corner and screamed, but as she did, a hand came outta the darkness and covered her mouth.

"Stay away from that Detective young lady, or you'll come to a bad end"

gradbeth
gradbeth
Well-Connected

Oct-31-2005 19:30

The above was me, forgot to change det, my bad

*takes off her biomajorbeth costume and continues the story*

Just then the hand released the little girl, who we will call Nikki. Nikki runs back to Ran and this time instead if just taking his money, explains everything, from LED stealing her chocolate to the man in the alley

Ran thinks this might allhave something to do with that case the police stole

Lady Emerald Devon
Lady Emerald Devon
Nomad

Oct-31-2005 20:35

Although LED was a little confused by all the events, she did know one thing.

It was not choclate but a bomb ... the evil Slugworth (a member of the militant Greenhand) had sabotaged the leading Chocolate Factory's supplies as the General Manager was in the habit of cutting down a pine tree every Christmas to decorate for his staff. Of course, he had specially grown these trees for that very purpose and always replaced the one cut down with ten new saplings, but these tree hugging ..... whatever they were before hippies were invented....

LED took the bomb back to &H where she knew her fellow agents would be working.

Meanwhile...


Lady Emerald Devon
Lady Emerald Devon
Nomad

Oct-31-2005 20:35

*S&H :)

R Anstett
R Anstett

Nov-1-2005 05:36

Shakes his head as he watches everyone scurry around the scene. Seeing Lady Em hurry off with a chocolate bar as a little girl was crying was strange enough.

But Mak and JST had mentioned chocolate also. Hmmm, maybe he should take another look at that file. He moved to a brighter lit doorway and opened it up.

What he had first thought were blood stains turned out to be chocolate finger prints all over the evidence. Maybe the dames were on to something.

As he walks past a newstand with ridiculous stories of a glass flying object he tries to track down that Bitter Sweet Detective. Something clicks in his mind. Chocolate, Bitter, Sweet, finger print stains.

There was a dark chocolate lover out there with sticky fingers and he wanted a taste of it.

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