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Of Phoenix & Concubines: A Jospeh Zeo SM
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Paranoid_Android
Paranoid_Android
Story Teller

Dec-6-2009 15:03

"During the premiére performance of a Chinese opera at the Grand Theatre, the prima donna is killed in a tragic stage accident… or was it a 'staged' accident!"

*drumroll* If you venture over to Shanghai you will find a new SM by Joseph Zeo.

I recommend this to you all as worth a play.

[Ben'll shift this post to Game Announcements later]

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Heimlich VonVictor
Heimlich VonVictor
Vigilante

Dec-6-2009 17:13

Congrats JZ! I love it! It's a great mystery that will keep you guessing until the very end. I highly recommend everyone to give this one a play.

Joseph Zeo
Joseph Zeo
Tale Spinner

Dec-6-2009 19:12

Thank you everyone! You have all been wonderful support. For those who had helped me test it in the past, I'd like to extend my gratitude once again. My special thanks to SS, for being a more than excellent editor. Honestly, the FM would only be 1/3 as good without his magic touch :) I love the result, for it is a synthesis of group effort.

In terms of the story line I like this one way above my first FM (the first being my test subject). Hope you all enjoy the melodramatic story :P Feel free to post or PM me any comment, I'd love to hear from you about what you think, because it will help me improve on my 3rd one. :)

Secret_Squirrel
Secret_Squirrel
Safety Officer

Dec-6-2009 19:26

:D the beauty of being involved with Noir for so long is that I've lived through so many melodramas I have a wealth of experience to tizzy up peoples SM's with ;D

Joseph Zeo
Joseph Zeo
Tale Spinner

Dec-6-2009 19:50

Oh and Elizabeth, thank you for your encouragement. I'm glad you like the first one (^^).

Vulkie3
Vulkie3
Haynes

Dec-7-2009 03:33

Great story JZ,I've sent you the little "mistakes" that I've seen in your story (SQUIRREL!). xD. Anyhow,great plot,great confusion making and a great writer. JZ,you are truly an SM/FM writer and you're already remembered as one,but now one of the best! Together with Heimlich,you'll rule the SM/FM's xD. (just kidding people xD.)

Anyhow,can't wait for the third one... ^-^

Vulkie3
Vulkie3
Haynes

Dec-7-2009 04:05

(srry for pointing out the errors in public Squirrel. Sorry for troubling you all with my comments. And sorry that I messed things up once more again -.-. Anyhow,I just want to be polite,to point out some errors. JZ,you have a pm containing them. Above message from me may be deleted by a mod if required)

Rosamund Clifford
Rosamund Clifford
Tale Spinner

Dec-7-2009 04:36

A great mystery, JZ! I enjoyed playing it very much. As our townies like to say, you really know your stuff :)

turtledove
turtledove
Gopher to the Sleuth Gods

Dec-7-2009 07:26

Congrats Joseph! SMs are a lot of work but from what I've just read you seem to have mastered the art! I haven't played it yet but I'll get to it :-)

Joseph Zeo
Joseph Zeo
Tale Spinner

Dec-8-2009 21:03

Thanks Vulkie for pointing out the typos. I am sure Squirrel is busy tizzying those up if not already. He sure is a wonderful and hardworking little rodent (^^)

Thank you Rosamund for your encouragement :) Turtledove, i just hope the FM lives up to its buzz. Hope you'll enjoy it when you get around to Shanghai :)

Keira Ann
Keira Ann
Bloodhound

Dec-17-2009 01:18

Great mystery! Kept me guessing until the end.

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